Some people believe money is the best gift for teenegers, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Unquestionably, each coin has two sides and so are the belief of the people. Society’s people are divided into two groups and
therefore
, money is the best present for teenagers has became
a topic of Change the verb form
become
a
debate. Correct article usage
apply
This
is
essay will compare and contrast both Unnecessary verb
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of
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apply
the
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opinion
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opinions
along with
the
sensible conclusion.
Initiating, with the points supporting Correct article usage
a
first
school of Change the article
the first
thoughts
, that it is necessary to give notes as a form of Fix the agreement mistake
thought
gift
. Add an article
a gift
For instance
, according to
recent
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a recent
study
60% of adolescents are saving money for the future. Add a comma
,study
In addition
, it is going to be very beneficially
for all the Change the word
beneficial
individual
who Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
begin
with Change the verb form
begins
this
strategy of funds as it will help with managerial skill
. Fix the agreement mistake
skills
Moreover
, this
will make them understand the principal
of the gift. Correct your spelling
principle
Furthermore
, it is a difficult task for an adult to understand what shall be the
best for the kid. As they are growing through their puberty period in which, Correct article usage
apply
the
choice Change the word
their
keep
on changing. Correct subject-verb agreement
keeps
Therefore
, the best choice should be the cheque.
On its
contrasting side, the other viewers believe, that it has more drawbacks. Change the word
the
For example
, in
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apply
the
recent Correct article usage
a
survey
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,survey
it
states that 70% of students use their money on Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
unnecessary stuff like video games and other electronic gadgets. Which will not make them realise the importance of family, education and other things. As Correct article usage
apply
result
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,result
this
will became
a disaster for the parents Change the verb form
become
itself
.
Correct pronoun usage
themselves
To conclude
, I would like to stay
that the positive aspect will be more like fund management and saving for Correct your spelling
say
future
which is essential to know in today's era. Correct article usage
the future
Whereas
it can be misused also
. However
, it depend
upon the mindset of the individual and the way they are raised.Change the verb form
depends
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