There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, - Describe the construction - Explain why the construction is a problem for you - Say what you would like them to do about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to discuss

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the noise caused by the ongoing construction

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close to nearby my home. It can cause mental and physical issues

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the fine dust and loud sounds. I understand that 380 building has initiated the renovation of the entire building and they are expected to finish their

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end of June, but the difficult part is that they are performing their jobs till late

night

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at night

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, the heavy machine and construction vehicles have caused disturbance to me and my family. As I live with my grandparents who are having

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sleeping at night.

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, my

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life is

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being affected as I have to postpone all my calls

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due to

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sounds

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the sounds

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of machinery. I would be very grateful if you can let the workers know, to not

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during

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sleeping hours and if possible, they can complete their pending tasks during

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the daytime

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. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Sam

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

168 words

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There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, - Describe the construction - Explain why the construction is a problem for you - Say what you would like them to do about it

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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While some people consider air pollution to be the most dangerous environmental problem, others believe that soil pollution has a more serious effect on our world. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people nowadays don’t feel safe either when they are at home or go out. What are the reasons? What can we do to solve this problem?

People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier?