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Nowadays majority of people claim that, it is not correct way to feed untamed animals and keep them, because there is no any benefits from them. I completely disagree with this statement, as animals consist one of the main part of our planet and also there would not be any human existence if wild animal would disappear.

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Nowadays the majority of
people
 claim that it is not the correct way to feed untamed
animals
 and keep them because there are no benefits to them. I completely disagree with
this
 statement, as
animals
 consist of one of the main parts of our planet and
also
 there would not be any human
existence
 if the wild
animals
 would disappear. A number of
people
 think that only humans
existence
 should live on our planet earth because only humans can benefit our species, but it is far from the case.
People
 believe that, as they want to have a luxury lifestyle by building their homes or accommodating themselves in huge spaces. They do
this
 in order to make themselves comfortable and definitely they blame wild
animals
 because
people
 do not have any benefits from them. Untamed
animals
 are constituted the main part of our
existence
, without ,them there would not be any human
existence
.
Animals
 helped them with their wool, and meat in order to make
people
’s lives better and by the time we started to forget about our wild
friend
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 help because of our modern lifestyle which is becoming more complicated day by day.
On the other hand
, nowadays we are living in a world where technology is well developed and many
people
 think that now they do not need
animals
, as machines can provide for our needs. If we took
this
 viewpoint deeper, we are able to understand how in fact they are essential to our human
existence
.
For example
, wild
animals
 consist of one of the main parts of a life cycle, which means they are crucial not only for nature but
also
 for
people
 living too. In conclusion,
people
 claim that untamed
animals
 should not be protected as there are no benefits from them, but if we will not start denying
this
 viewpoint we would lose not only our wildlife but
also
 our planet too.
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