Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian aid during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

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should help poor communities during natural disasters. I believe that It is completely fine to associate people in these situations, so I totally agree with

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statement that will be going to elaborate on in the present essay. First of all, solidarity among nations in these kinds of situations will show that humanity is still alive. An earthquake or a flood can happen everywhere in the world even in wealthy

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I think that it is a duty to pay attention to underprivileged folks who are stuck in a natural disaster, especially

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. People who live in industrial

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should know that their equipment and facilities are not permanent ,

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they should use them in a way to be beneficial for all individuals.

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, world leader

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have lots of tools and machines which can help to increase the speed of rescue missions,

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as helicopters,

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and trained staff.

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, poverty will increase crime and disease which can affect other nations.

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, people who are

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might have to migrate to developed

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which can

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some issues.

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, It is more beneficial to all

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rebuilding Turkey after the recent earthquake because it can reduce the number of migrants to Europe. In conclusion, I truly believe that wealthy communities should help poor nations with any aid during natural disasters. We are all human and we should show our kindness and humanity when a disaster occurs.

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