The graphs shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London

The graphs shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London
The provided line graph illustrates passenger
number
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numbers
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in
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at
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certain hours in one of
underground
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the underground
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station
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stations
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in London.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the graph that at approximately 8:00 in the morning had the highest
number
of passengers,
while
the lowest
number
at 6:00 A.M and 16:00 o’clock.
To begin
with, at 6:00 in the morning the
number
of passengers starts with one hundred, it grows suddenly to reach a peak point of 400 people at 8 o’clock. After that, the
number
of the people had a gradual decline to arrive under 200 at 10 A.M.
Next,
there was a slight increased to hit 300 persons by 14:00 and decreased sharply to hit the lowest point of just below 100 at 16:00 in the afternoon. After which time, the
number
of passengers in the station has risen rapidly to around an average of 350 people and
then
drop slightly less than 150.
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