The graph shows the number offatal injuries (resulting in death) of workers in New Zealand between 1992 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number offatal injuries (resulting in death) of workers in New Zealand between 1992 and 2010.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the changes in the number of workers who received fatal injuries in New Zealand over the time period from 1992 to 2010. The horizontal axis provides the years,
while
the vertical the sum of people. As can be seen from the graph, in 1992 the statistics reveal that the number of people was at a level slightly higher than 6.000 and rose gradually until the year 1994 reaching 6,6 thousand.
However
, the growth was followed by a moderate continuous decline til 2002 attaining the level of 5,5, which is less than in 1994 by more than a thousand.
In addition
, there was again a slight 4-year increase resulting in 5,8 thousand in 2006, but the ensuing plunge lowered
this
index to 5,2 in 2008.
Moreover
, the number of people fell significantly in 2009 and remained almost constant in 2010 at a level
around
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of around
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4,5. In conclusion, the
overall
trend is likely to be downgraded not considering some periods where the index had slowly risen.
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