The graph shows the number offatal injuries (resulting in death) of workers in New Zealand between 1992 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the changes in the number of workers who received fatal injuries in New Zealand over the time period from 1992 to 2010. The horizontal axis provides the years,

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the vertical the sum of people. As can be seen from the graph, in 1992 the statistics reveal that the number of people was at a level slightly higher than 6.000 and rose gradually until the year 1994 reaching 6,6 thousand.

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, the growth was followed by a moderate continuous decline til 2002 attaining the level of 5,5, which is less than in 1994 by more than a thousand.

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, there was again a slight 4-year increase resulting in 5,8 thousand in 2006, but the ensuing plunge lowered

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index to 5,2 in 2008.

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, the number of people fell significantly in 2009 and remained almost constant in 2010 at a level

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4,5. In conclusion, the

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trend is likely to be downgraded not considering some periods where the index had slowly risen.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

168 words

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