Write a letter to a friend to inform him/her about a job opening in your company. Describe the job; 1) write about the job. 2) How is it suitable for your friend? 3) How to apply for the job.

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Hey Mario, As you know I've been working for more than 3 years in BSP company which has great support in all the areas of hospitality . BSP company brought me many opportunities in

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industry and I learnt a lot. I am writing you a letter to let you know that there is a great position for you as a supervisor roll . I am pretty sure you will do a good job because I know how hard you've been working to learn and get all the skills as a front-of-house, barista and chef . I think now is your time to put your level up and get a better position . I will send you a form where you can read all the duties and requirements of the supervisor job in BSP company . If you decide to apply for the supervisor role you can just send your CV to

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email [email protected]

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, make sure to write an introduction about yourself and your availability as well and they are gonna contact you . If you need anything just let me know . Good luck and see you soon. Pedro .

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

193 words

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