The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Identifying the international

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is one of the key roles of a multinational society. The gains which

people

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can get by accepting

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as a global

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has been exceeded what

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would lose on the way to proceed.

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opinion, it is hard to agree with

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opinion because the disadvantage of pursuing the global

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is underestimated at

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moment,

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, it does not require having a unified

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thanks to developed

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, there are high potential risks to lose the precious local

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and

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the culture which strongly related to the

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. A minor

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which has a small number of speakers would be endangered because of the social advantage of learning

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, Ainu is the local

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that used to be spoken in the northern part of Japan until the early 20th century. Now it is almost erased because the Japanese government had tried to spread and identify Japanese by speaking the same

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. It is recently argued that

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have lost the Ainu culture at the same time as losing the

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shows that verbal historical heritage has been destroyed by pushing one-sided advantages. And the same things are happening all over the world. To encourage

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negative trend and invade the worthy culture must be overweighted that the advantages.

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, the lacking of

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skills has not become a big issue with the support of

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and the advantage of trying

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in common is not the same as it used to be. The

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of translating

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has a huge growth in the industry and the accuracy and fluency of them are getting close to the native speaker.

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, the inventory can translate at the same time as the speaker has been introduced. Communication in different languages can be covered by these technologies with less demand for learning other languages spending much time. In conclusion, the challenges

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have been facing to make

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a global

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have more cons than pros and

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the supportive

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lets us become free from

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barriers which means that it is not an urgent task to have literacy in the same

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

global language
lingua franca
communication
employment opportunities
economic growth
cultural exchange
knowledge sharing
education
travel
linguistic diversity
cultural imperialism
linguistic imperialism
colonization
identity
language preservation
cultural heritage
mutual understanding
intercultural relationships
linguistic barriers
disadvantaged communities

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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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