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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Identifying the international
language
 is one of the key roles of a multinational society. The gains which
people
 can get by accepting
English
 as a global
language
 has been exceeded what
people
 would lose on the way to proceed.
In my
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 opinion, it is hard to agree with
this
 opinion because the disadvantage of pursuing the global
language
 is underestimated at
this
 moment,
moreover
, it does not require having a unified
language
 thanks to developed
technology
.
Firstly
, there are high potential risks to lose the precious local
language
 and
also
 the culture which strongly related to the
language
. A minor
language
 which has a small number of speakers would be endangered because of the social advantage of learning
English
.
For example
, Ainu is the local
language
 that used to be spoken in the northern part of Japan until the early 20th century. Now it is almost erased because the Japanese government had tried to spread and identify Japanese by speaking the same
language
. It is recently argued that
people
 have lost the Ainu culture at the same time as losing the
language
,
this
 shows that verbal historical heritage has been destroyed by pushing one-sided advantages. And the same things are happening all over the world. To encourage
this
 negative trend and invade the worthy culture must be overweighted that the advantages.
Secondly
, the lacking of
language
 skills has not become a big issue with the support of
technology
 and the advantage of trying
English
 in common is not the same as it used to be. The
technology
 of translating
language
 has a huge growth in the industry and the accuracy and fluency of them are getting close to the native speaker.
Additionally
, the inventory can translate at the same time as the speaker has been introduced. Communication in different languages can be covered by these technologies with less demand for learning other languages spending much time. In conclusion, the challenges
people
 have been facing to make
English
 a global
language
 have more cons than pros and
also
 the supportive
technology
 lets us become free from
language
 barriers which means that it is not an urgent task to have literacy in the same
language
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • lingua franca
  • communication
  • employment opportunities
  • economic growth
  • cultural exchange
  • knowledge sharing
  • education
  • travel
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural imperialism
  • linguistic imperialism
  • colonization
  • identity
  • language preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • mutual understanding
  • intercultural relationships
  • linguistic barriers
  • disadvantaged communities
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