Research into new types of medicine is essential to improve health and deal with disease. Who do you think should fund this research- private companies, individuals, or governments?

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a positive impact on healthcare in improving health and dealing with diseases. That brings us to think about who should fund

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kind of research- a private company, an individual or the

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? I would argue that conducting medical research is enormously expensive, time-consuming and involves tremendous effort and patience

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secured funding is crucial.

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, as we know it,

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money

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for medical are limited and

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resources

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taxes

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of wealthy

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individuals

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or companies, making them financially incapable of attending the long-term

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, there are those who can afford

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funding and are well-established in

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type of business, like Elon Musk,

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, and Pfizer, since they have all the means and are well-versed in the medical research

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medication and medical innovation will be pricey for those in the marginalised community.

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, I believed that

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if the

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policies

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drug

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prices in the market,

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make a difference.

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would allow the

government

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to interfere with their pricing if it is unreasonably high. In the Philippines,

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, it's been a contention for a

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about the high-price

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in the market,

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of the officials in the

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the policy was pushed through

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in the approval of the bill that mandated private companies or

individually

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own

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pharmaceutical

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companies

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to reduce the

drug

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price in the market. In conclusion, I would argue that it should be done by private companies or individuals who are capable to do

long term

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doing long-term

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and expensive research

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role

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the

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plays a vital

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in creating policies that intervene in the reduction of

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pricing, as

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benefit

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many people

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