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The table shows the income and expenditure of Brooklyn Hall, a place for hiring, over the period of three years.

The table shows the income and expenditure of Brooklyn Hall, a place for hiring, over the period of three years.
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The given table compares the annual
income
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 and expenses of Brooklyn Hall over a three-
year
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 period. In general, the
overall
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 expenditure increases more than the total
income
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 which led to a decrease in the profit through the given years. Looking at the table for more detail, room
income
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 was higher than any figures, from 32,000
pounds
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 in the first
year
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 and grew to 33,000
pounds
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 in the
last
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 recorded
year
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, which was about ten-fold that of the cafe. The
income
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 by the cafe in
year
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 3 doubled to
this
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 figure in
year
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 1.
Besides
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, the fundings
of
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 the council tower and individuals were almost the same in the first two-
year
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 (around 20,000
pounds
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).
While
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 the funding of other bodies maintained unchanged in
year
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 3, the statistics for the council tower declined to 15,000
pounds
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. In terms of the total
income
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, there was a slight increase from 72,000 to 78,000
pounds
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 over
this
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 period.
However
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, the
overall
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 expenses of
this
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 Hall rapidly rose from 63,000
pounds
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 in
year
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 1 to 77,000
pounds
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 in
year
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 3, which led to a decrease in the profit by 8,000
pounds
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 over
this
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 period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, pounds, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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