The table shows the income and expenditure of Brooklyn Hall, a place for hiring, over the period of three years.
The given table compares the annual
income
and expenses of Brooklyn Hall over a three-year
period. In general, the overall
expenditure increases more than the total income
which led to a decrease in the profit through the given years.
Looking at the table for more detail, room income
was higher than any figures, from 32,000 pounds
in the first year
and grew to 33,000 pounds
in the last
recorded year
, which was about ten-fold that of the cafe. The income
by the cafe in year
3 doubled to this
figure in year
1. Besides
, the fundings of
the council tower and individuals were almost the same in the first two-Change preposition
for
year
(around 20,000 pounds
). While
the funding of other bodies maintained unchanged in year
3, the statistics for the council tower declined to 15,000 pounds
.
In terms of the total income
, there was a slight increase from 72,000 to 78,000 pounds
over this
period. However
, the overall
expenses of this
Hall rapidly rose from 63,000 pounds
in year
1 to 77,000 pounds
in year
3, which led to a decrease in the profit by 8,000 pounds
over this
period.Submitted by thanhvinhdoi338 on
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