Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Poor people, is poor because they want to be poor
There are multiple reasons behind social inequality and
poverty
. Although
many people
feel that poverty
is a personal decision, I totally disagree with this
statement due to
the challenges that financial and education
systems represent for low-incoming people
to improve their economic conditions. I feel this
way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, the successful development of new companies and businesses in many cases depends on a bank load. Indeed, even the most revolutionary ideas required funding for their achievement. In this
sense, poor people
have more obstacles to getting a loan due to
bad or nonexistent credit records. For example
, my family took the decision to open a restaurant a few years ago. Despite my mother being an amazing chef, the banks rejected all our requests because we did not have enough financial recommendations to get the load. For
this
reason, it was impossible that my family made reality their dream to have a restaurant and improve our economy and that of other families
.
Secondly
, high-quality education
is fundamental to getting jobs with high salaries. However
, low-incoming families
' children have few opportunities to study due to
they are obligated to work and get some money for their families
. Further
, if they have the chance to study, it would be in low-quality schools and universities. Thus
, this
reduces the options of millions of families
to overcome poverty
around the world. Indeed, countries with less education
index also
show a high proportion of their inhabitants with incoming below the poverty
line. For instance
, my country is a good example of this
situation. In Colombia, more than 50% of the population does not have access to three foods a day evidencing the precarious economical context of millions of families
. At the same time, only two of the ten studies that finished high school get a professional education
. This
example demonstrates how in Colombia as well as
in many countries the low accessibility to good education
is directly related to poverty
.
In summary, I strongly believe that despite personal decisions having a significant role in our finances, access to a bank load and high-quality education
are determinants of the economic success of people
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