Some people believe online reading material should be only be used for child to learn to read, whereas others belive only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Unquestionably, every coin has two sides and so are the

people

. Society's

people

are divided into two groups and

therefore

online reading material has become a topic of debate among the

people

This

essay will compare and contrast both of the opinions

along with

my opinion which is in the favour of former view will be discussed in a sensible conclusion. Initiating with the points supporting the first school of thought,

Firstly

, these days most of the reading

content

is digitized and made available on the internet, so pupils will get benefited because of largely available online

content

Secondly

, we should reduce paper usage to save money and eventually trees. In fact, in these modern

days

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,days

show examples

students are not carrying any more books and study materials in their backpacks

instead

they are carrying them in portable electronic devices.

For example

, a study conducted in the United States predicts that in the coming future, most educational institutions are going to offer their courses online. On the contrasting side,

people

who held another viewpoint say that at least children should avoid reading online

instead

they should be given printed papers to study. They believe that increased screen time damages their eyes and leads to long-term sight issues.

Moreover

, the smaller size letters in online

content

are one of the main reasons for youth eye problems.

For instance

, a survey conducted in Hong Kong revealed that the number of vision problems among the youth increased

this

year.

To conclude

, I would like to say that students should get used to digital

content

to cope with the current technology trend.

However

, it will depend upon the mindsets of the

people

which view they are in favour of.

Submitted by janardhan.gangineni on Mon Apr 03 2023

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