2-Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Zoos

have a critical role in keeping animal species. Some proponents vote for saving

animals

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lives ,

whereas

opponents have an opposite point of view. In my humble opinion,

animals

have the right to be set free rather than

imprisoning

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them.

Firstly

, animal breeders are aggressive with

animals

.

In other words

,

animals

are exposed to

a

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certain violence

due to

their limited knowledge about the way of taming

animals

.

Furthermore

, animal

lose

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their instinct for hunting and adapting the

wild life

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wildlife

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.

For example

, lions and tigers which return back to the wild forest,

they

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couldn't catch their prey spontaneously,

besides

it

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may die

due to

their inability to keep up with climate changes and tough

enviromental

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environmental

issues. what can be said is that

animal's

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nature

were

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distorted by human beings.

On the other hand

,

zoos

could be a good solution for endangered

animals

and rare

animals

.

In other words

, when the

animals

have been hunted by the hunting organization, it will lead to

imbalance

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among different kinds of

animals

in our ecosystem.

For instance

, pandas were killed by establishments because they

keen

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on profitable projects

such

as selling the skins of these

animals

. On top of that, establishing

zoos

open

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opens

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up many job

opportinutes

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opportunities

for the local residents. These examples show

that

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the

ilegal

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illegal

activities of certain

foundtions

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foundations

and

it's

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their

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merit in increasing the number of employed youths. In conclusion,

after

this

essay has shown the advantages and disadvantages of

zoos

, it can be said that lawmakers should impose a law to prevent the extinction of

the

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rare

animals

. I think that the government should punish the outlaws who offend

animals

.