The pie chart illustrates the proportion of persons who are captured and the bar chart illustrates the reason why they are captured in the five years ending 1994 .
The two diagrams provide data on the percentage of arrested people and the third chart gives information about their motivation in the five years ending 1994.
It is clear that
the proportion of captured men accounted for almost one third
of the total and the figure for women who were arrested was rather lower and made up only about Add a hyphen
one-third
one tenth
.
Probing Add a hyphen
one-tenth
further
, getting drunk in public is the most popular reason to be arrested for both men and women (about 30% and 37% respectively). However
, men are also
usually captured for drunk driving, the percentage accounted for approximately one fourth
, Add a hyphen
one-fourth
when
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while
assault
is a quite popular reason for women (almost 20%). About 5% of both groups gave no answer Add an article
the assault
an assault
for
the question about their crime motivation.
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to
Overall
, male persons are captured 3 times more than females and the most popular reason for recent arrests is public drinking.Submitted by mgshetler on
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