The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
The given bar chart depicts the disproportion of cell
phones
and landlines per hundred people
in seven different countries.
Overall
, as can be seen from the chart that
the number of Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
using mobiles steadily increases from Canada to Italy. ,However
the amount of Add a comma
,However
landline
users
fluctuates. ,also
we can see that Italy has the highest number of cell phone users
although
it also
has the lowest landline
Correct quantifier usage
number of landline
users
.
Speaking of the first three countries Canada,Us and Germany regarding mobile users
they’re right at around 36,58,71 respectively. both Canadian and US folk have a tendance
to use landlines more than cell Correct your spelling
tendency
phones
.Whilst Germany is the complete opposite the window between mobile users
and landline
users
is 10 phones
per hundred people
for mobile users
.
On the other, hand the rest four countries Denmark, the UK,Sweden and Italy prefer the usage of mobile phones
except for Denmark which has approximately 87 phones
per hundred people
. ,,
Change the punctuation
apply
moreover
it is the highest country regarding Add a comma
,moreover
landline
users
. In ,comparison Italy's landline
is users
student 45 despite that it still exceeds the 10 mark in mobile users
by around seven phones
per hundred people
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