The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
The graph shows the
number
of mobile phones
and landlines
per 100 users, for selected countries
. Overall
, most of the countries
included in the graph have more mobile phones
subscribers than Change the noun form
phone
landlines
.
Most European countries
have high mobile phone use. The biggest users of mobile phones
are the Italians, with 88 cell phones
per 100 people
. For example
, Italy has twice as many mobile phones
as landlines
, with 88 mobiles per hundred people
compared to 45 for landlines
. Mobile phone use is low in Canada, with fewer than 40 phones
per 100 people
. Denmark is also
unusual because it has slightly more landlines
than mobile phones
.
However
, in some countries
, the number
of landlines
is higher than the number
of mobile phones
. One example is the USA, where the number
of mobiles, at 50 per 100 people
, is much lower than the number
of landlines
, at almost 70 per hundred. A similar pattern can be seen in Canada. The highest number
of landlines
in the graph is in Denmark, with about 90 per 100 people
. In contrast
, the lowest figures for fixed lines are in Italy and the UK.
In conclusion, it seems that mobile phone use is higher in Europe than in North America.Submitted by samiahammadi77 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, phones, landlines, countries, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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