the diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
The diagram illustrates the industrial production process of
sugar
from sugar
cane.
The first
step
is growing sugar
canes
. It takes about more than a year. After Fix the agreement mistake
cane
that
they are collected by farmers with Add a comma
,that
combine
or by a sickle. The third Add an article
a combine
step
is putting ripe canes into a crushing machine whenever they get ground up and we get out of this
juice.The next
step
is putting juice to
the limestone filter where it Change preposition
in
purified
and gets dirty away.
Shortly afterwards, cleared juice Add a missing verb
is purified
get
into the evaporator where it Correct subject-verb agreement
gets
heat
up and becomes Change the verb form
heats
a
syrup after that syrup immediately puts into Correct article usage
apply
centrifuge
where it separates Add an article
a centrifuge
sugar
crystals from syrup
. The Add an article
the syrup
last
step
of diagram
is that Add an article
the diagram
a diagram
sugar
is dried and cooled in a special barrel and at the output
we get pure Add a comma
,output
sugar
.
Overall
, after analyzing the above stages, it can be seen that the formation process of sugar
from the raw material sugar
cane entails many steps such
as harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporating, centrifuging, and finally
drying and cooling.Submitted by ast7660780 on
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