the diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The diagram illustrates the industrial production process of

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from

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cane.

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is growing

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canes

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. It takes about more than a year. After

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they are collected by farmers with

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or by a sickle. The third

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is putting ripe canes into a crushing machine whenever they get ground up and we get out of

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juice.

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is putting juice

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the limestone filter where it

purified

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and gets dirty away. Shortly afterwards, cleared juice

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into the evaporator where it

heat

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up and becomes

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syrup after that syrup immediately puts into

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a centrifuge

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where it separates

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crystals from

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the syrup

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. The

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of

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the diagram

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is that

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is dried and cooled in a special barrel and at the

output

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we get pure

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.

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, after analyzing the above stages, it can be seen that the formation process of

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from the raw material

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cane entails many steps

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as harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporating, centrifuging, and

finally

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drying and cooling.