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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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Becoming similar nations is a topic of discussion. I agree that it has a negative development. The first reason would be
about
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the decline of
economy
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 in the country which
innovate
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 and produce that item first. Because of the reason when tourists want to buy something during travel
time
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 they prefer not to buy
due
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it due
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 to having that product in their country.
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, coco channel perfume which is
producing
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 in France and
export
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to
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all around the world, people like to buy it in their home towns and spent their
time
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sightseeing. So, individuals will not bring money to
country
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 and the economy will witness some crisis
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years
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. The second
one
 is about, nations might
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 some part of their culture
due to
 some items
are
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representing the tradition of some areas and by purchasing them
on
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 own countries might be forgotten their regions by humans.
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, a
favorite
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 tart which is come from Italy and Italian would always eat with white wine and now all the bakeries produce it in
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 wrong way and it lost
it
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identity
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.
Hence
, people will forget what it was and what was
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origin of it. Some may argue that there is a positive development by producing an item around the world and in
this
 way, countries becoming more similar to each other. Because people do not need
put
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 their
time
 and money to go abroad to
by
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one
 specific item.
However
, putting
time
 and money
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 travel can give them
a
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wealth that
noting
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 will replace it. In conclusion, I
am agree
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 that it has a bad effect on development for two reasons,
one
 is about the
increasing
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of
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economy
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 and the other
one
 is about the culture
lose
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 during the years.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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