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The Spread of English as a global language is an issue nowadays. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The
English
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language
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 has become the international
language
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 that almost every nation has to
use
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 these days.
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 some
people
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 say
this
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 may look like modern colonization, I agree that the benefits of the spread of
English
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 outweigh the drawbacks.
To begin
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 with, since the colonization era, the
English
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language
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 has become popular across the continent as spread by the western
people
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. Some
people
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 argue that the increasing popularity of
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language
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 may posses threats to the local
language
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.
This
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 may be true to some extent as elite younger generations prefer to speak
this
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 international
language
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 in their daily conversations rather than their mother tongue
language
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.
However
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, Understanding
English
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 has a lot more benefits. A huge range of
books
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, from science
books
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 to medical
books
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 and even novels are printed in the
English
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language
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.
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, university students will gain much more knowledge and horizons if they understand
English
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.
In addition
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, the schools or community can make a campaign to the public to
use
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 our mother
language
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 in balance with the
English
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language
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.
Moreover
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, the increasing
use
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 of
English
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 may cause cultural degradation
in particular
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 countries.
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, it may not be true as long as the locals preserve and practice their culture. to illustrate
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, Balinese
people
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 have a strong and beautiful culture that remains until now, and even become stronger and more famous. Most of them can fluently speak
English
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 but it does not prevent them to
use
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 their own
language
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 and practice their traditional ceremony. In conclusion, the global spread of the
English
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language
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 may be seen as detrimental to the local
language
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.
However
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, the advantages of understanding
English
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 outweigh the negative effects as many
books
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, great movies, and advanced technologies are introduced in
English
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • lingua franca
  • communication
  • employment opportunities
  • economic growth
  • cultural exchange
  • knowledge sharing
  • education
  • travel
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural imperialism
  • linguistic imperialism
  • colonization
  • identity
  • language preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • mutual understanding
  • intercultural relationships
  • linguistic barriers
  • disadvantaged communities
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