The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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The given diagram illustrates the process involved to generate electricity from a geothermal power plant.

Overall

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, there are five steps related to the whole mechanism to produce heat

at the end

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To begin

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with, cold

water

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is pumped down approximately 4.5km from a storage area to the injection well.

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, it passes through a geothermal zone which consists of hot rocks, and the

water

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is heated. After that, the hot

water

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crosses the production well and is pumped up to the condenser. Eventually, the condenser turns the

water

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into steam after condensing. The steam has an important role in the

last

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step and it is associated

turbine

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and generator. The

turbine

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is powered by steam

as well as

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a generator powered by the

turbine

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and

finally

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produces electricity. The heat is transferred to the electric tower to distribute to the consumer. The production of electricity in a geothermal power plant is mainly conducted by the cold

water

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, the injection well, the production well, the condenser, the

turbine

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as well as

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the generator.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

172 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

geothermal energy
generate electricity
diagram
volcano
magma reservoirs
deep underground
heat
steam
geothermal plant
turbine
condensed
pumped back
underground reservoirs
transmitted
power grid
distribution
continuous
renewable
volcanic activity

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