When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent you agree or disagree with the statement? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your argument with examples and relevant evidence.

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has required for smooth work. Now we are passing

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modern era, which is executing a different type of outcome and

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we are forgetting our ancient part of ability

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is not the cost-effective and easiest way. In my point of view , we should not carry

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I will elaborate on why I disagree.

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, worldwide our daily costs are increasing for all parts of the stage. when we rise in the morning and go to bed at the night. If we do not care about our required terms we have options for some

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development for better performance and handy. For example, in the morning when we want to go for breakfast we took help from the bread toaster and

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past we are depending on our mother and wife but

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is now very easy for us. There is no require any human labour

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physical work. we can get all demand very short time.

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, in our medical sector required for technological changes

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the patient's disease are founding a lot. If we are not developing our medical

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fight against diseases.

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, we faced a very recent corona pandemic worldwide at the beaning our medical department can not take the initiative for

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vaccine for different variants people get immunity and protect

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we will face a lot of hassle in every part of life.

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