The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart provides data on the percentage of 3 different groups of people who visit four places of interest in one northern country.
It is clear that
cinema is the most popular zone to chill out among native Canadians and immigrants from English-speaking countries
(70 per cent
and almost 65 per cent
respectively). More than half of all new migrants from other countries
are fond of spending their time in the library. However
, this
place is not quite popular among citizens, the proportion account
for about one-third of the total.
Probing Change the verb form
accounts
further
, theatre is the least popular place. The percentage of Canadians, English immigrants and immigrants from the rest of the world make up only 20 per cent
, about 25 per cent
and one-tenth of the total respectively.
Overall
, the cinema is the most popular place for locals and migrants from English-speaking countries
to spend their spare time, while
the library is in demand among foreigners from other countries
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