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Write about following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

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It is true that we are making much more rubbish. There are various reasons why
this
 is the case. In my opinion,
this
 problem is a result of our consumer culture and the
government
 could do more to deal with
this
 issue.
otherwise
, global warming will become quicker. There are two main reasons why people make a lot of trash.
Firstly
,
products
 are not made to
last
, so people may throw them away and buy a new product if something breaks.
This
 means that they do not think about the consequences of throwing the rubbish,
also
 they assume that somebody is paid to clean the street. Another reason is that packaging is an important part of selling and most
products
 are sold in non-biodegradable plastic packaging. So
this
 waste ends up in landfill sites or people keep the trash on the street.
However
, there are steps that
government
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the government
show examples
 could take to fix these problems.
Firstly
, they could invest money in
the
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apply
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advertising green
products
,
secondly
, the
government
 should put legal limits on the packaging, which would help to improve the environment. In China,
For example
, there are
much
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many
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 more collection banks for glass, paper and plastic bottles and every household must use several rubbish bins to separate waste. A third option would be to develop consumer culture by avoiding buying over-packaged
products
 in order to make less trash. In summary, for a society that needs the idea of protecting the environment,
Government
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the Government
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 could certainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for humans.
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Provide a stronger introduction and conclusion that directly address the topic and provide a clear thesis statement. Make sure to fully address all parts of the topic question, including discussing reasons for increased rubbish production and providing relevant examples. Organize the response to ensure cohesive and logical development of ideas.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • sustainability
  • landfill
  • recycle
  • single-use products
  • waste management
  • regulatory measures
  • composting
  • biodegradable
  • environmental impact
  • incentives
  • sustainable practices
  • circular economy
  • zero waste
  • responsibility
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