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The chart above, illustrates four factors regarding the standards of life in different countries (Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia, USA).

The chart above, illustrates four factors regarding the standards of life in different countries (Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia, USA).
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The chart shows the information of
factors
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 which influent the quality of life in five different countries (Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia and the USA) It can be seen from the table that there are four different
factors
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 to calculate the quality of life in the nations.The USA have the most of number in almost all types of
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 except infant mortality is the least compared with other countries. Interestingly,
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 the USA have the most figures in 3
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 : GNP per head ,daily calories supply per head, life expectancy at birth at 13160 dollars, 3653 calories and 74 years respectively, as opposed
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infant mortality
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 the least just 12 persons per 1000 live births. Bangladesh has a birth rate the most at 132 persons per 1000 live births,
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 another three
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 are the least of
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 table at 140 dollars, 1877 calories and 40 years respectively.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words factors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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