The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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bar chart gives us pieces of data about the different means of transportation for people going to and returning from their work in a European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
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Overall
it appears that through decades, the favourite means of transit wasn't the same to travel to work. Linking Words
For instance
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while
bike and foot were the most popular in 1960, both modes in 2000 were the less used.
Indeed, only 7% and 10% used bike and foot to travel to work in 2000 Linking Words
whereas
it was more than 25 % and 35 % of people who used these means of shipment 40 years earlier. Linking Words
Conversely
, the car was used by 7% of people in the 1960s Linking Words
while
the rate of car use considerably exploded by 17% in 1980 and Linking Words
until
30% in 2000 to reach a peak of 37% of users. Change preposition
by
Finally
, the bus is the only mode of transport which remained rather importantly used over these 4 decades with 17% of users minimum in 2000 and until 27 % in 1980.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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