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Some people believe that watching big events like sports and the Olympics on TV encourage adults to exercise regularly. While others disagree tzzhat there are other effective ways of getting them to exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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A number of nations argue that Olympic or
sports
TV
 programmes can be causes of
activity
 in families but some others believe another reason can help them to have some activities. I argue that the two views are correct and that
people
 in different situations affect in different ways. on one hand, numbers of nations believe that they are receiving the effects of
sports
tv
 programs to
exercise
. they have some reasons for their arguments.
firstly
, when
people
 watch
tv
, knowing about different areas of sport and it maybe causes them to like a
sports
 subject.
for example
, when they watch volleyball someone who sees it for the first time like it and wanted to learn volleyball.
Secondly
, watching
sports
 affects our mood and we prefer to have activities and be athletes.
finally
,when we see an athlete's
body
 we want to have the same
body
 as them. I believe that it really has good results.
on the other hand
, other nations believe that they receive effects in other ways .
for example
 , doctors encourage them to
exercise
 for their
body
's health or when someone who wants to be thin and have a lower weight so they prefer to
exercise
.
also
, old
people
 should have
special
Add an article
a special
show examples
exercise
 for their health. in conclusion, some
people
 argue that
tv
 programs encourage them to have
activity
 and
exercise
 but others believe that they have other causes for their
activity
 ,
for example
,
body
 health. I believe that two arguments are correct and what is important is to have
activity
.
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