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Scientists believe that computer become more intelligent than human . Some people believe that it is a positive development ,other think that is a negative development .Discuss both the view and give your opinion .

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There is growing sentiment today related to artificial intelligence, some
people
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 believe that computers being smarter than humans is a positive
development
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 others think that the opposite is true. From my point of view,
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 its trend brings some disadvantages, the advantages outweigh it and I believe it is a positive
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.
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 with, those who advocate that it is a negative
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 claim that the intelligence of computers and modern
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 will replace many jobs and makes
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 become unemployed.
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, there are many workers in large industries who are being replaced by modern
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. Investors spend a lot of money to invest in
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instead
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 of hiring
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 like in the past. The main reason is modern
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 bring more productivity than the community and it makes
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 unemployed.
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, I believe that
technology
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 brings many benefits to
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's
life
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.
Technology
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 and computer make
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's
life
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 better and easier. Thanks to artificial intelligence,
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's
life
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 becomes more and more comfortable and convenient. In daily
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,
technology
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 brings many helpful tools
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 as fast searching tools Google, Chat GPT, etc. It
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 provides us with
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-supporting
machines
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such
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 as automatic vacuum cleaners, washing
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, air purifiers, dishwashers, etc. In science,
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 helps
people
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 in many different aspects, some calculations apps can calculate quickly and accurately and give us final results correctly and faster than
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 do or they can help
people
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 in searching information and finding some news. In conclusion, I think that the
development
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 of artificial
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 and
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 computers is a positive trend. We should focus on developing the
technology
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 because its potential will help us in many aspects of the future.
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