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In some countries, university students live away from home and in another city while studying. Do you think the disadvantsges outweigh the advantages of living in another city?

#countries #university #students #home #city #disadvantsges
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to you because I recently purchased an item from your virtual store but when the item reached my home it was not working as expected. The food processor that I received from you stops when working. I have read your user manual to find any solution for
this
 and
also
, I have checked
this
 product at different power outlets in my house to be sure that it is the new gadget that has an issue. My family likes home-cooked meals very much. I ordered
this
 machine in hopes that it will make my work easier but I am disappointed to find a mechanical error in
this
 piece. It is crucial for me to have
this
 article in the kitchen because I am working full time and have very little time on hand in the evening to cook food. I would like to ask you to send me a new unit and
also
 collect
this
 device from my residence. I do not hope that you will ask me to pay any extra amount for changing the appliance.
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