You have recently moved to a new neighbourhood and would like to join a sports centre there. You have found a private sports club. Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, introduce yourself say why are you interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, membership, costs etc. Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir / Madam, I moved to
this
suburb, Beverly Heights, just a month ago. I learnt from my neighbour about your activity hub, The Fitness Centre and I would like to become a member.
Firstly
, let me tell you about myself. I am an IT professional and I work in ABC Digitals which is not too far away from here. I am
also
a fitness enthusiast and I am very pleased to know that your centre is located in
this
neighbourhood. As I am very fond of exercising and keeping myself healthy, I would like to use my spare time in the evenings on weekdays and weekends by participating in the activities of your club. The reason I am keen on joining your club is that you are open 24x7 and I have heard that you offer a personal trainer.
Hence
, I would like to know if you have some of the following facilities: a sauna, lockers, modern gym equipment etc. Please
also
let me know the kinds of subscriptions that you offer and their costs. Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Yours sincerely, Kamal Singh
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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