Global warming is now generally agreed to be a very serious problem . what are the causes of hlobal warming and what should governments do to reduce it

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Global warming is the most challenging issue in
humankind
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history. The rise of
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temperatures
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on
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surface
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human activities, primarily fossil fuel burning, is now bringing several consequences worldwide.
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essay begins by discussing an overview
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energy
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sources since the
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industrial
revolution. It
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argues whether or not to keep wasting money on alternative
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sources because they are too unreliable to ever replace coal and oil.
Subsequntly
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, it explores how
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complex problem is addressed by the global community and which initiatives have been taken to reduce
greenhouse
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gas
emissions
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. First of all, it is fair to say that,
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of
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industrialization
industrialisation
since
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nineteenth century,
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wellbeing
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of mankind has dramatically increased, not only
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develop of the world as we know it now
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but
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to access to a wide variety of goods and services currently available in the global market.
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, floods, fires, droughts, extremely high temperatures in summer and heavy snow storms in winter, among others, as we have seen lately, are just consequences of the
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gases trapped in the atmosphere, produced by fossil fuel burning and
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knows as global warming.
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of climate change, in my opinion, it is mandatory to keep investing resources to develop alternative
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sources, of course
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economically
feasibles
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feasible
, which eventually will replace coal and oil, and
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to
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reduce
the
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greenhouse
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gas
emissions
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.
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, it is not only about developing and producing them
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but
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storing and distributing them. To address
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situation, The Paris Agreement was created back in 2015, which aims to encourage its signatories to reduce their carbon
emissions
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.
This
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initiative covers climate mitigation, adaptation and funding for its members. Lately, initiatives like electric
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vehicles
, including public transport and trucks are becoming very common and
soner
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sooner
than later will replace fossil fuel cars. Of course,
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is not enough, but it is a start.
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, photovoltaic
energy
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through either a domestic level in form of solar panels or as huge solar farms storing and distributing renewal
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is another initiative that aims to
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reduce
CO2
emissions
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, the progress
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by the world society since the industrial revolution based on fossil fuels has expired.
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practice
raise
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temperatures
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the temperatures
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of
earth
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because of
the
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greenhouse
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gas
emissions
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.
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is currently causing natural disasters worldwide and
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this
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model is no longer sustainable.
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, the Paris Agreement was founded in 2015 and aims to drastically reduce
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CO2 emission worldwide.
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