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Some people think that it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree?

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Few of them think that teaching every young student, how to be a good parent is a great plan. I disagree
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 proposition as I believe students are very young to fathom the complexity of good parenting. The proposal of teaching what is good parenting to younger
children
 is not a very good approach.
Firstly
, students are too young to understand what
good
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 upbringing is and there is
scope
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of
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 misleading their parents.
Secondly
, they are very immature and their young minds need to be thought about the subjects rather than focusing on having a family and raising their kids.
Additionally
,
such
 information taught to
children
 may not always be a positive outcome of it, rather distracts them from focusing on their academics. Especially, in a country like India where most parents send their
children
 to school even when they are not educated may impact
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their life from what is taught in
school
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 where there is a possibility of
children
 misusing
this
 information.
Overall
, the main focus should be on teaching academics or encouraging them to play any sport or creativity. When
children
 are young, they should be focused on learning how to be a better
individual
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 and a citizen before a good
parent
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. In my
opinion
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 I strongly disagree
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 the said proposal
due to
 the
above mentioned
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 reasons.
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