Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

According to
the research most online
meetings
and
trainings
Change the wording
training
pieces of training
show examples
these days are
conduced
Correct your spelling
conducted
show examples
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
online. Online meeting saves
employees
time
and money
however
, lack of focus
between
Change preposition
among
show examples
the workers during
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
online meeting. In my
opinion
Add a comma
,opinion
show examples
it brings more benefits than drawbacks.
Firstly
, online meeting saves travelling
time
and money. In traditional
meetings
Add a comma
,meetings
show examples
workers need to
travel
other
Change preposition
to other
show examples
states or countries to attend
meetings
and meet some
people
which means
people
travel
a lot .
For example
, in my previous company
employees
need to
travel
other
Change preposition
to other
show examples
counries
Correct your spelling
countries
to attend
meetings
and
trainings
Change the wording
training
pieces of training
show examples
but now
meetings
held
Add a missing verb
are held
show examples
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
online which saves
lot
Change the article
a lot
show examples
of
time
to
Change preposition
for
show examples
the
employes
Correct your spelling
employees
show examples
.
Likewise
, online
meetings
are more economical than the traditional
one
Correct pronoun usage
ones
show examples
which saves
travel
expenditure and
accomandation
Correct your spelling
accommodation
expenses.
For instance
, one of the tech
giant
Fix the agreement mistake
giants
show examples
google
Change the capitalization
Google
show examples
announce
Change the verb form
announces
show examples
they save $3 billion dollar from
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
traditional
meetings
.
However
, Online
meeting
Fix the agreement mistake
meetings
show examples
also
have
Change the verb form
has
show examples
some drawbacks.
Employees
who attend their online
meeting
Fix the agreement mistake
meetings
show examples
have
lack
Correct article usage
a lack
show examples
of focus during the meeting. when
people
attend their
meeting
Fix the agreement mistake
meetings
show examples
through
Change preposition
apply
show examples
online are easily distracted
from
Change preposition
by
show examples
the surrounding noise,
people
or whatever.
For example
, The
times
Correct your spelling
Times
show examples
of
india
Change the capitalization
India
show examples
reports
people
who attend their meeting
via
Change preposition
apply
show examples
online had
lack
Correct article usage
a lack
show examples
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
focus compare to
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
traditional sessions because
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
Traditional sessions minimizes distraction because there is a direct interaction between
people
.
Moreover
,
meetings
are disturbed
due to
technical
fault
Fix the agreement mistake
faults
show examples
or some network issues. In conclusion, despite
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
some drawbacks online sessions are more
benificial
Correct your spelling
beneficial
than
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
traditional meeting.its saves
lot
Change the article
a lot
show examples
of travelling
time
and money
to
Change preposition
for
show examples
the
employees
and employers.
Submitted by madhavansubase on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • virtual collaboration
  • teleconferencing
  • webinar
  • remote access
  • cost efficiency
  • cultural diversity
  • interactive platform
  • networking opportunity
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • cybersecurity
  • encryption
  • bandwidth
  • digital divide
  • screen fatigue
  • team cohesion
  • asynchronous communication
What to do next:
Look at other essays: