Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,
government
and private organisations do more scientific Use synonyms
research
to improve our Use synonyms
lifestyle
. whether scientific Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
research
should be carried out controlled by the Use synonyms
Government
or private are a big debate in recent years. I partially agree that both Use synonyms
Government
and private organisations do Use synonyms
research
for better growth.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
Government
may reduce medicine costs to do Use synonyms
research
in medical fields. If Use synonyms
Government
do more Use synonyms
research
in the medical field, they provide quality and cost-efficient drugs to the public. Use synonyms
For instance
, The Russian Linking Words
Government
provides free medicine to their people because their Use synonyms
government
should carry Use synonyms
medical
Change preposition
out medical
research
. Medical Use synonyms
research
conducted by the Use synonyms
Government
is necessary to control by the authorityUse synonyms
,
because conducting a scientific investigation through the administration of a country would think as more reliable and ethical, compared to a private institution. Remove the comma
apply
Secondly
, councils Linking Words
does
not think about the profit so they only conduct Change the verb form
do
research
on the countries and people's growth. Use synonyms
For example
, every country's authorities invest more money to do Linking Words
research
in renewable sources which means they only care about their country's resources Use synonyms
instead
of making a profit.
Linking Words
However
, in the Linking Words
last
20 ,years private Linking Words
organisation
do more Fix the agreement mistake
organisations
research
to survive and make a profit in Use synonyms
this
competitive world. many companies need to build their brands, which means the organisation needs to improve their product quality and sell it Linking Words
to
a competitive price. Change preposition
at
For example
, Tesla conducts more Linking Words
research
on their cars and provides more innovative things to their cars which built their brand image and market share. Use synonyms
Likewise
, private management gave more innovative products which changed our world. Linking Words
For instance
, In 2007, steve jobs introduced Linking Words
Apple
Correct article usage
the Apple
iphone
Correct your spelling
iPhone
it's
a great breakthrough in the smart industry.
In conclusion, Wrong verb form
it was
Government
do Use synonyms
research
in some critical industries like the medical and energy industries, ,Use synonyms
Linking Words
Otherwise
they should support private organisations to do their Add a comma
,Otherwise
research
.Use synonyms
Submitted by madhavansubase on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.