Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,
government
and private organisations do more scientific research
to improve our lifestyle
. whether scientific Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
research
should be carried out controlled by the Government
or private are a big debate in recent years. I partially agree that both Government
and private organisations do research
for better growth.
Firstly
, Government
may reduce medicine costs to do research
in medical fields. If Government
do more research
in the medical field, they provide quality and cost-efficient drugs to the public. For instance
, The Russian Government
provides free medicine to their people because their government
should carry medical
Change preposition
out medical
research
. Medical research
conducted by the Government
is necessary to control by the authority,
because conducting a scientific investigation through the administration of a country would think as more reliable and ethical, compared to a private institution. Remove the comma
apply
Secondly
, councils does
not think about the profit so they only conduct Change the verb form
do
research
on the countries and people's growth. For example
, every country's authorities invest more money to do research
in renewable sources which means they only care about their country's resources instead
of making a profit.
However
, in the last
20 ,years private organisation
do more Fix the agreement mistake
organisations
research
to survive and make a profit in this
competitive world. many companies need to build their brands, which means the organisation needs to improve their product quality and sell it to
a competitive price. Change preposition
at
For example
, Tesla conducts more research
on their cars and provides more innovative things to their cars which built their brand image and market share. Likewise
, private management gave more innovative products which changed our world. For instance
, In 2007, steve jobs introduced Apple
Correct article usage
the Apple
iphone
Correct your spelling
iPhone
it's
a great breakthrough in the smart industry.
In conclusion, Wrong verb form
it was
Government
do research
in some critical industries like the medical and energy industries, ,Otherwise
they should support private organisations to do their Add a comma
,Otherwise
research
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