Two weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well-known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and it is still not ready. Write a letter to the shop. In your letter say what has happened and how you feel ask them to explain why there has been a delay ask them to repair the radio very quickly or to supply you with a new radio
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with your repair service. About two weeks ago I returned my radio in order to repair it. As I told your assistant the radio suddenly stopped working. I tried to sort it out, I was even researching on the internet, but nothing worked.
I thought that a well-known chain like yours would have fixed the problem in a very short measure of time, but I think now that I was mistaken. I am starting to feel a little bit frustrated since I haven’t received any communication from you. I would like to know why it has taken so long to repair.
It would be very nice of you to look into
this
matter at your earliest. I would be grateful if you could at least supply me with a new radio as I wait for the other one to be repaired.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
David VegaSubmitted by Abdalla.omar214 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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