You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are well. My name is Martyn and I am a student of Building Services Engineering. I am writing

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letter regarding my shared accommodation. I came to campus three days ago and noticed that I am allocated to a single room,

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I am not alone. I need to share one bedroom space with another student, which as you can imagine is not ideal. One of our biggest problems is storage space, we have only one wardrobe. I already tried to unpack my stuff and

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there is not even enough space for them,

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a place for my roommate. The second issue appears to be a single desk, it is impossible for us to learn and do our homework at the same time. I would like to request a bigger room with adequate furniture for two people, especially with two desks and wardrobes. Please could you have a look at the current situation and let us know as soon as you can. Looking forward to hearing from you, Martyn

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

179 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
roommate
share a room
living arrangement
difficult to work
noise levels
study environment
privacy concerns
alternative accommodation
single room
academic performance
well-being
respectfully request

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