The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991 - 2014.

The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991  - 2014.
The line graph illustrates the amount of three kinds of
jams
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consumed in an Asian country over 23 years from 1991 to 2014. Units are measured in tons. In general, what could be highlighted from the graph is that the number of strawberry
jams
consumed is decreased significantly. Another interesting point is that the consumption of cherry
jams
has increased
during
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5 years, and
then
decreased slightly. Looking at the details, as regards strawberry
jams
,the consumption started at 140
tonnes
in 1991,
then
reached a peak at 160
tonnes
and experienced a gradual drop to around 45
tonnes
during the 18 years. During the rest of the observed period, approximately 85
tonnes
of lemon jam were consumed in the first year and 40
tonnes
in the
last
year.
On the other hand
, cherry
jams
started to be consumed only in 2006, experienced a
sharply
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increase and
then
dropped slightly.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words jams, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • pattern
  • popularity
  • significant
  • steady increase/decrease
  • peak
  • trough
  • outstrip
  • surpass
  • dip
  • sales
  • culinary preferences
  • market share
  • per capita
  • demographics
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