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Pollution is becoming a major envoronment problem. What are the causes and solutions to sole this problem?

#pollution #envoronment
Contamination is becoming the most environmental issue. Human products are the most reason for creating
factories
 and
factories
 are the reason for
pollution
. These days human beings can cause a
lot
 of
pollution
 like sound
pollution
 , plastic
pollution
 and a
lot
 more reasons to create dirt and toxic things for the earth. In
this
 paragraph, we will talk about how to make human beings have better
use
 for their products , which is the main reason for contamination.
People
use
 a
lot
 of things during the day and
also
 throw a
lot
 out.
People
 should
use
 what they have especially used less plastic can affect our environment positively. In
this
 paragraph, we will talk about how to fix the dirt from our earth.
People
 should not build more
factories
 and should grow the
factories
 by adding more employees to them. They have to try to
use
 more plants and more earth-friendly things.
To sum up
 ,
pollution
 will be controlled by
people
's will.
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