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Pollution is becoming a major envoronment problem. What are the causes and solutions to sole this problem?

#pollution #envoronment
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Contamination is becoming the most environmental issue. Human products are the most reason for creating
factories
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 and
factories
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 are the reason for
pollution
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. These days human beings can cause a
lot
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 of
pollution
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 like sound
pollution
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 , plastic
pollution
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 and a
lot
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 more reasons to create dirt and toxic things for the earth. In
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 paragraph, we will talk about how to make human beings have better
use
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 for their products , which is the main reason for contamination.
People
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use
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 a
lot
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 of things during the day and
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 throw a
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 out.
People
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 should
use
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 what they have especially used less plastic can affect our environment positively. In
this
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 paragraph, we will talk about how to fix the dirt from our earth.
People
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 should not build more
factories
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 and should grow the
factories
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 by adding more employees to them. They have to try to
use
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 more plants and more earth-friendly things.
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 ,
pollution
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 will be controlled by
people
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's will.
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