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The plans below shows the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The plans show the site in its present look and the redeveloped look of the southwest airport.
Overall
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, there are some changes planned, with additional
gates
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 in the north
along with
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 a few shops in both the arrival and the
departure
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 zones. Focusing on the
departure
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area
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, the difference in the plan for the next year will be the change of the sides for the cafe, check-in
area
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 and lots of space given to the bag drop
area
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 which is expected to be located near the cafe. Going along the plan through the security passport control
area
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, the empty space was covered by a few shops for
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-minute purchases of passengers. At present, the
departure
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 has only 4
gates
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 with walkways for people to get to their
gates
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.
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, it is going to be replaced with 9
gates
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 in total and a sky train
instead
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 of the walkway, which can be used by both the arrival and the
departure
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 passengers. Regarding the arrival zone, it has an empty
area
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 for passengers to arrive, but the redevelopment process will have a cafe, an atm and a space for car hire
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. The passport control customs and the following room will remain the same.
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, similar to the
departure
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 zone, the arrival zone has an idea to increase the number of
gates
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 from 4 to 9.
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