Nowadays, an increasing number of young people display anti-social behavior and a lack of respect for others. What are the causes of this problems? can you suggest any solution?
Causes
of young Correct article usage
The causes
people
being anti-social and less respectful Use synonyms
to
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of
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others’
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others
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behavior
among young Change the spelling
behaviour
people
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varies
depending on the situation and area where they grew up. Change the verb form
vary
However
, Linking Words
But
in most Correct word choice
apply
cases
there are some factors Add a comma
,cases
internally
and Change the word
internal
externally
factors that may affect Change the word
external
adolescent
and young Fix the agreement mistake
adolescents
people
’s Use synonyms
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behavior
towards Change the spelling
behaviour
others
.
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First,
young Linking Words
people
as a part of a family, Use synonyms
their
the personal growth of young Replace the word
they're
they are
people
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are
mainly affected by their family, particularly their parents. It is affected by how they have been treated in the family, what kind of words Correct subject-verb agreement
is
that
are used, and what Correct pronoun usage
apply
are
the right gestures are used. Teenagers somehow copy ied their relatives' Unnecessary verb
apply
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behavior
as they think thought it might be the right thing to do. Change the spelling
behaviour
For example
, a simple act Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
by
letting the children play with their gadgets all day long without communicating with their familyChange preposition
apply
,
will probably make them think that it is okay not to communicate and build social relations.
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apply
Second,
as Linking Words
a
social Correct article usage
apply
human
, young Fix the agreement mistake
humans
people
spend their time socializing and building networks Use synonyms
within
their Change preposition
with
neighborhood
, Change the spelling
neighbourhood
friends
, and Change preposition
with friends
adults
. When they go to school and meet their classmates and teachers, they learn about how to respect Change preposition
with adults
others
. Use synonyms
For instance
, if a teacher shouts a bad word or shows no respect, the student will copy and do the same thing to Linking Words
others
.
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To conclude
, youth Linking Words
behaviors
and values can be affected by Change the spelling
behaviours
from
where they grow Change preposition
apply
in
the family or in society. To handle Change preposition
up in
this
, there are some suggestions that adults could use to support their children's Linking Words
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behavior
Change the spelling
behaviour
such
as Linking Words
involvinge
them in Correct your spelling
involving
character building
training and Add a hyphen
character-building
show
continued support from the family by being a role model in respecting Wrong verb form
showing
to
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apply
others
.Use synonyms
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