You travelled by a long-distance bus recently and your suitcase was damaged. Write a letter to the bus company. In your letter, inform the bus company of when and to where you travelled describe your suitcase and what happened to it explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to express my disappointment caused by your company.I am a regular commuter of your bus service "Sunshine Transportation".Unfortunately, my suitcase
was damaged because of the carelessness of your staff and I would request you to investigate the issue so it doesn't happen to any other commuter.
I travelled from Edinburgh to Park Avenue on 4th June.But after arriving at my final destination, I found out that my suitcase
had got damaged. And it was not any kind of minor damage, that could be fixed or something, rather it was some major damage that didn’t only involve scratches all over its body, but also
some broken wheels.
Now, I am not really sure as to what had exactly happened, or who was exactly in charge of handling it, but I would really appreciate it if your company pays me for a new suitcase
. After all, this
suitcase
is not only beyond any repair but also
because I think that negligence on the part of your company also
played a huge role in damaging it.
I would really appreciate it if I hear from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
SoumithriSubmitted by mohan315.bits on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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