he graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

he graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The line chart illustrates how much carbon dioxide
emissions
were produced by individuals from 1967 to 2007 in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal. In general, Portugal and Italy’s trends toward CO2
emissions
increased significantly during the given period,
while
the United Kingdom and Sweden showed an opposite trend. In 1967, Portugal was the country with the least production of CO2
emissions
with only less than 2 metric tonnes;
however
, its trend went up moderately to around 5 metric tonnes in 2007.
In contrast
, the United Kingdom produced the most CO2 at the beginning, but
then
the trend decreased steadily until 2007.
On the other hand
,
although
Sweden started as the country that released the 2nd highest CO2
emissions
at the beginning of the period and reached a peak in 1977, its movement
then
dropped significantly
afterward
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and had the same amount as Portugal
at the end
of 2007. Similar to Portugal, Italy’s
emissions
rose steadily from 1967 to 1997, but
then
it
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remained stable until the end of the period in 2007.
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