Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Sport has always been very socially important for every country and

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internationally for political arguments. In

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era and age, some nations decided to focus more on specialised facilities to develop top athletes rather than give

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facilities to the entire population. In my opinion,

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is a negative decision even if it can lead to important results in global

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essay analyses the benefits of

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action,

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as the increment of top athletes and the international fame of the country, compared with their drawbacks. Respectively the loss of interest by

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, especially children and the bad impacts on society. First of all, building new specialised structures is an optimal method to create new

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professionists

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, analysing the

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effects, if there are no public buildings that

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every individual to practise these activities we will

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not have attention and interest in them.

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situation will lead to a lack of

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who want to become real athletes and do these kinds of

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as a job. Football,

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, had the power, during the

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war world, to stop murders and unite everyone. If we remove the normal practitioners we will lose the beautiful and true power that they have.

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are born as recreational time to give happiness to

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society, which can release

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daily stress through them.Indeed, research conducted by universities

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that

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consider

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as their main vehicle to escape from reality and to release endorphins.

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, medals and cups are not useful to achieve

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goal. Nations should keep in mind the real scope of these activities and encourage

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to practise them and not reduce their opportunity to enter

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contact with them.

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, we should teach who has the authority to decide which facilities and for whom to build, how

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are important for

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society and how they are a right for the population.

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Topic Vocabulary:

specialised facilities
train top athletes
international sports
boost
reputation
attract
sporting events
access
general public
inequality
opportunities
overemphasis
elite sports
neglect
grassroots development

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