Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sport has always been very socially important for every country and

also

internationally for political arguments. In

this

era and age, some nations decided to focus more on specialised facilities to develop top athletes rather than give

sport

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facilities to the entire population. In my opinion,

this

is a negative decision even if it can lead to important results in global

competitions

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.

This

essay analyses the benefits of

this

action,

such

as the increment of top athletes and the international fame of the country, compared with their drawbacks. Respectively the loss of interest by

people

, especially children and the bad impacts on society. First of all, building new specialised structures is an optimal method to create new

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professionists

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professionals

.

However

, analysing the

long term

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effects, if there are no public buildings that

permits

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every individual to practise these activities we will

also

not have attention and interest in them.

Moreover

,

this

situation will lead to a lack of

people

who want to become real athletes and do these kinds of

sports

as a job. Football,

for example

, had the power, during the

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war world, to stop murders and unite everyone. If we remove the normal practitioners we will lose the beautiful and true power that they have.

In addition

,

sports

are born as recreational time to give happiness to

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society, which can release

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daily stress through them.Indeed, research conducted by universities

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that

people

consider

sports

as their main vehicle to escape from reality and to release endorphins.

Thus

, medals and cups are not useful to achieve

this

goal. Nations should keep in mind the real scope of these activities and encourage

people

to practise them and not reduce their opportunity to enter

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contact with them.

To conclude

, we should teach who has the authority to decide which facilities and for whom to build, how

sports

are important for

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society and how they are a right for the population.