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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

#advertisements #life #development
It is true that the frequency of advertisements is rising in our daily routines
Although
this
 has several disadvantages, the
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benefits
 may be far more significant. On the one hand, there can be some minor downsides
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 the rising of
this
 media.
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 possible issue is that many contents provide misleading and dishonest information.
As a result
,
this
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 consumers to make purchases that they later regret. By way of illustration, the attractive advertisements and reliable commitments of Apax Leader English,
this
 misleading promise has
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to
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the losing money and receive nothing from
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education after the Apax
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. Another detrimental effect could be that
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, the fact that
this
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 marketing messages can have major advantages which overshadow these negative impacts. The most obvious benefit could be that the advertising informs consumers about new products and services which
allow
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 them to make informed decisions about what they purchase. By
the
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advertising
of
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some
smartphone
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smartphones
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 or
laptop
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, we can update
ourselved
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ourselves
 with the improvement and the progress of technology. Another merit worth mentioning is that
this
 digital media can create jobs in the marketing and advertising industries, which contribute to
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. Countless real-life examples have shown that Oppo Smartphones, which products had advertise strongly by many
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 faces
that
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make
this
 company
has
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a strong position in Vietnam's economic market and
also
 increase the sale at stay in
top
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 three common
smartphone
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smartphones
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 in Asia. In conclusion, despite the potential downsides of many advertising
campain
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campaign
campaigns
 in our day-to-day routine, the beneficial effects brought about are
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 importance.
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