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The bar graph compares the percentage of university education among youths in six different countries between 2000 and 2007.

The bar graph compares the percentage of university education among youths in six different countries between 2000 and 2007.
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The bar graph compares the percentage of
university
education
 among youths in six different countries between 2000 and 2007. From 2000 to 2007,
it is clear that
 Italy, Britain,
Poland
 and Finland saw their
education
 rates increase,
while
 Spain and Norway saw them decrease.
Poland
 has seen the biggest rise in
education
, becoming the country with the highest number of
university
-educated people. Italy and
Poland
 had the highest growth among the six countries. The proportion of Italians with a
university
education
 rose from around 38
percent
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 to 52
percent
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, the same as in
Poland
, and from around 62
percent
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 to 76
percent
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. Finland's
university
 undergraduates maintained the same level at 70
percent
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 during the period. In Spain and Norway, fewer young people went to
university
 in 2007 than in 2000,
according to
 the par chart.In 2007,
Poland
 had twice as many people in
education
 as Spain
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It reached as high as 80
percent
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. It can be seen that from 2000 to 2007,
Poland
, Norway and Finland had the highest
university
 attendance rates of all the six counties.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university, education, poland, percent with synonyms.
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