Some people think that governments should be responsible for carrying out and controlling scientific research rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is sure that
science
plays a fundamental
role
in the country's development. There is a school of thought, arguing that the
government
is obliged to conduct and control scientific
research
instead
of the private company. I disagree with
this
claim. Those people in
favor
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of
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the government
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government
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dominant
role
in scientific
research
consider the duty and power of authority.
Science
and technology are developing fast if a country wants to be economically strong
then
it must keep up with these developments. It is supported that
government
should take
their
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responsibility
in
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conducting scientific
research
and pioneering
in
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technological innovations in order to
thriving
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economy
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the economy
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and society.
Besides
that,
science
is a complicated subject as it develops so quickly that constantly
need
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needs
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new resources and stable
fundings
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funding
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. It is governments , raising money by taxing income, that have
adequate
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and stable
budget
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budgets
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that can support
long term
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scientific
research
.
However
,
this
doesn’t mean that a vast majority of scientific activities should be controlled by governments without the participation of private
companies
. It will put a heavy burden on
financial
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budget so that the
government
will have to cut down its investment
to
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other sectors
such
as education,
health
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and health
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care, which may pose a negative effect on people’s living standards.
Furthermore
, private corporations with purposes of earning profit generally have sharp market insights and competitiveness that the administrations do not have. The competition between
companies
serve
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a useful function of accelerating the speed of technological innovations and leading them into
market
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the market
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with lower prices, in order to benefit the people.
Besides
that, private
companies
are typically professional with
more
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the more
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powerful
research
team
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and experts, offering technical assistance.
Therefore
, they tend to achieve a more significant result than the governments. In conclusion, despite the indispensable
role
of
the
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authority , l believe it is the private enterprise
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take
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a leading part in scientific
research
.
Government
should play an important
role
in encouraging and supporting
the
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companies
and
organization
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organizations
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on
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the
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society to make a joint effort in
the
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developing
science
and technology.
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