Government should spend more money on railways and roads. To what extent do yo agree or disagree with this statement

It is widely believed that
government
should spend more
money
on
railways
and
roads
. Personally, I can neither completely agree nor disagree with
this
statement for a variety of reasons. I partly agree that
government
spend more
money
on
railways
and
roads
to
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economic development . One of the main reasons can be that may be
due to
the
government
building
railways
and
roads
in the future is the development of transport system.
This
means that
economic
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development of
country
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because clear traffic creates easy conditions for trade, import and export. Another reason can be that people can travel everywhere.
On the other hand
, I disagree with the
viewpoint
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that
government
should spend
money
money
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builds
railway
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railways
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and
roads
.
Firstly
,
government
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the government
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should spend
money
to support social security.
This
is because the
gep
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gap
between the rich and the poor in Viet Nam is high, so
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
should support
for
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poor people.
Secondly
, when
government
builds
railways
and
roads
, they will collect more taxes. In conclusion,
although
have some
reason
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reasons
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disagree
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governemt
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government
spend
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on
money
railway
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railways
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and
roals
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goals
roads
rolls
, I’m convinced that
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
should
building
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build
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railways
and
roads
in future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Infrastructure
  • Economic development
  • Accessible
  • Efficient transport
  • Trade and tourism
  • Traffic congestion
  • Pollution
  • Public transportation
  • Emissions
  • Job opportunities
  • Workforce
  • Unemployment rates
  • Modernized
  • Safety standards
  • Budget allocation
  • Holistic approach
  • Underfunding
  • Crucial areas
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