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With the increase in computer use, many people feel that schools do not need to put the emphasis that they used to on basic handwriting skills or mathematics skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the computer era changed the necessary
skills
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 for
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, and it is often argued that there is already no need to learn basic handwriting or
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skills
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 in school. I particularly agree with
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 statement but in my opinion, basic
skills
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 are still vital and it is impossible to give good education without these
skills
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. On the one hand, in the modern world handwriting uses less and less, and
people
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 more often use typing on the keyboard when they want to write something, by reason that typing is faster, and usually looks more clearly than manuscripts.
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, before the invention of the printing press books primarily was created by handwriting, and needed a lot of
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 who has the skill of clear handwriting for the production of books. But now, when books produce by printers,
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 skill is not so popular at all as in previous times.
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, for research science,
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skills
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 are significant and it is impossible to imagine a scientist or engineer who does not know basic
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.
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, when
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 are able to automatize some processes, it is crucial to understand the basic principles of that automatization. Of course, computers have much better
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 abilities than humans, but for creating the logic of these computers, it is obligatory to have
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skills
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. In conclusion, in my point of view, some
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 like handwriting become less needed because of technical progress and the invention of new methods of writing, but some of the
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 stay constant for a long time. Who knows, maybe somewhen in the future, basic
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skills
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 will be useless.
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