If some people get a chance to choose between life without work and spending most of the time working, then they would choose not to work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is considered that there is an option to choose between
life
without Use synonyms
work
and spending most of the time working and some Use synonyms
people
want to Use synonyms
have
not Unnecessary verb
apply
to
Fix the infinitive
apply
work
. I completely disagree Use synonyms
to
Change preposition
with
this
view and there are several reasons and examples.
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To begin
with, a lot of Linking Words
people
prefer living on more exciting things than more tough Use synonyms
work
now. Because there are many kinds of technologies in every Use synonyms
person
home namely, washing Change noun form
person's
machine
or robots. These types of Fix the agreement mistake
machines
equipments
are very helpful for household chores. Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
As a
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result
Add a comma
,result
people
are being lazy day by day, especially young Use synonyms
people
. If they have trouble with their studying or Use synonyms
life
, they would be thrown away Use synonyms
their
own goals. They want to achieve all things easily.
Change preposition
from their
However
, Linking Words
although
some would choose Linking Words
life
without Use synonyms
work
, Use synonyms
the
every government in the world require Remove the article
apply
work
and knowledge. To means that every Use synonyms
person
always hardworking and Add a verb
isperson
wasperson
more
useful. The reason for Correct quantifier usage
apply
this
is that if multitudes intend to maintain their basic needs including the cost of food, education fees, medical bills, and to purchase clothes, Linking Words
then
they require money, and only through working they can achieve everything. Linking Words
For
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instance
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,instance
people
can all modern technologies to their job or goals way, but if they have not hardworking and patient or Use synonyms
knowledge
they can not achieve their goals or not be able to develop their economy. Replace the word
knowledgeable
As a
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result
Add a comma
,result
people
will begin to Use synonyms
becoming
poor and Change the form of the verb
become
this
is Linking Words
Add an article
a danger
danger
to their future Replace the word
dangerous
life
and the government.
In conclusion, I totally disagree with the notion because Use synonyms
people
may not earn their livelihood without working, and their nation will not be able to progress in their economy.Use synonyms
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