A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - Give details of the course you took at the university Explain why you recommend the university Give some advice about how to apply Dear ….,
Dear Dhruvi,
I hope that you are doing well. I am writing you
this
letter to share some more details of my summer vacation course that I completed Linking Words
this
year.
First and foremost, I attended the University of Toronto's Linking Words
four months
accelerated Robotics class to enhance my knowledge about automation in the manufacturing industry Correct your spelling
four-month
as well as
to learn fundamentals.
I think that you should Linking Words
also
join the U of T as not only it offers Linking Words
worldclass
education and tutoring but Correct your spelling
world-class
world class
also
allows students to do experiments by collaborating with students in other majors. Linking Words
Besides
that, it will be very convenient for you to travel to the university as you only live about fifteen minutes away from the campus.
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enrollment
there are two options either fill Add a comma
enrollment,
an
online application or visit the campus to fill out Change preposition
out an
application
form. But, I strongly urge you to visit the university to apply and ask for a tour as Add an article
an application
the application
then
you will be able to explore it and know more about the services that they offer.
If you still have any questions, let me know.
Best of luck for your course!
Warm wishes,
Ruchin PatelLinking Words
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single idea per paragraph
Consider introducing the course and university benefits in separate paragraphs for better clarity.
logical structure
While the letter is very well structured, consider adding a brief introduction mentioning why the friend is considering this course for an engaging start.
complete response
The letter addresses all parts of the task, giving details about the course, reasons for recommending the university, and application advice, thus fully achieving the task response.
suitable writing tone
The tone is friendly and informative, perfectly suited for writing to a friend, demonstrating a suitable writing tone.
greeting and closing
Excellent greeting and closing, maintaining an appropriate level of formality and friendliness.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.