At universities in some countries, it is common for students, especially for those who have no scholarship, to have jobs while they study. They may work in offices, at the library, in labs or as teachers’ assistants. They earn money for living expenses and sometimes receive a reduction in tuition as well. Is this a good idea? Support your opinion with specific reasons and details.
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the living expense and pay some fees in
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for
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. In my opinion, it is a positive development.
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workplace
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, they can Correct your spelling
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adapted
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adapt
this things
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these things
Furthermore
, students
do jobs along with
their studies
helpful for their parents because they can pay some tuition fees through their earnings For example
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